Friday, July 21, 2006

ghazal

Kal ka koi iraada na karein
Behtar hai koi vaada na karein

Tum bhi so-o chaen se roz
Hum bhi khwab dekha na karein

Unse milkar dil kahta hai
Saayon ka peechha na karein

Kal kisne dekha hai dost
Itne paas aaya na karein

Aage zameen pathhrili hai
Dariye ka bharosa na karein

Main musaafir rah-e-ishq
Mujhe aap roka na karein

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

fourth aur second last stanza impact ko kam kar rahe hain. rephrase - koi ek hi maqsad ho gazal ka - to aadmin uski leher main zhoom sakta hai.
-Amit

Anonymous said...

zabardast!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Subha-n-Allah
bahut ache kalam.

Roshan Saab aap ke ye ashar bahut dil choo lene wali hain.

excellant work

-Shajee

godharavs1947 said...

I like it. My personal experience in Pakistan was very pleasant. In Roshan Romani’s ghazal one couplet (sher) ends with, ” Wohi Mir ka deewan idhar bhi hai udhar bhi.” Can any one get me the first line?
(Dr. Virendra Singh Godhara from Kota, India.)

godharavs1947 said...

I like it. My personal experience in Pakistan was very pleasant. In Roshan Romani’s ghazal one couplet (sher) ends with, ” Wohi Mir ka deewan idhar bhi hai udhar bhi.” Can any one get me the first line?
(Dr Virendra Singh Godhara from Kota, India)