Kal ka koi iraada na karein
Behtar hai koi vaada na karein
Tum bhi so-o chaen se roz
Hum bhi khwab dekha na karein
Unse milkar dil kahta hai
Saayon ka peechha na karein
Kal kisne dekha hai dost
Itne paas aaya na karein
Aage zameen pathhrili hai
Dariye ka bharosa na karein
Main musaafir rah-e-ishq
Mujhe aap roka na karein
Friday, July 21, 2006
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5 comments:
fourth aur second last stanza impact ko kam kar rahe hain. rephrase - koi ek hi maqsad ho gazal ka - to aadmin uski leher main zhoom sakta hai.
-Amit
zabardast!!!!!!!
Subha-n-Allah
bahut ache kalam.
Roshan Saab aap ke ye ashar bahut dil choo lene wali hain.
excellant work
-Shajee
I like it. My personal experience in Pakistan was very pleasant. In Roshan Romani’s ghazal one couplet (sher) ends with, ” Wohi Mir ka deewan idhar bhi hai udhar bhi.” Can any one get me the first line?
(Dr. Virendra Singh Godhara from Kota, India.)
I like it. My personal experience in Pakistan was very pleasant. In Roshan Romani’s ghazal one couplet (sher) ends with, ” Wohi Mir ka deewan idhar bhi hai udhar bhi.” Can any one get me the first line?
(Dr Virendra Singh Godhara from Kota, India)
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